Comeback game


4TH Quarter down by a goal against a team from another suburb on the bench intensely watching knowing I would be coming back on very soon seeing our team struggling to comeback. I hear the coach say my name so I get up and run to the interchange Kai sprinting towards me, we hit hands and just like that I’m on the field. See the ball down at their end about to score then my teammate comes in and boots it out passing it to my other teammate I’m sprinting down with the wind in my back I see the ball flying over me, I keep on sprinting my teammate taps it forward just for me to get it before it goes in the point I grab it and drop it on my boot just like that “GOAL!” The crowd and I go wild and just like that it’s tied up!

6 thoughts on “Comeback game

  1. Jaye, you have some good descriptive writing here, but it needs a lot of editing. I don’t think you’ve included any full stops.

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